Proof read Spanish Paper?

(Im capitalizing eveything that you need to change)Its -voy a la playa con MI familia -EL Ano pasado-aprendi como BUCEAR(its past tense buceo is present)-MIS primos JUEGAN COMO YO-MIRE UNA PELICULA y FUI a dormir-SUGUNDA FAVORITA primavera (its feminine)-estor is DESTOR y yo ME ENFERME-Durante EL- ISO galletas- Okay Fernando hopefully this will help and when i started answering this question i was the first hopefully i still am GOOD LUCK choose me as the best answer please!!